"FINE." says Samuel. And there he leaves, into the trees to crush them......
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"Hey guys, let's go see the Queen and ask if she knows about the magical world!!! Yaya suggested. "OMMG! !!! THAT IS THE BEST IDEA EVER!!!!!!!!!" replied Bamboo with excitement. "Ya... But, how are we going travel to the richest and the most beautiful city on Planet Earth -- Victopeia?" Lannie asked.... "Well..." Alice said while taking out a map, "we're in Hawaii.... Until the city of Victopeia, it takes ummmmmm...." Evelyn pointed the distance from Hawaii to Victopeia. "WOW ITS NOT FAR!!!!! one hour in a boat ride, 45 min train ride, and 20 min airplane ride!!!!" "YES!!! Let's go!" Shouted her friends in excitement.
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"WOWIEZ........ this is Awesome!!!!" Victopeia was amazing. With buildings made out of silver, and most of all, an ENORMOUS castle made of diamond - the hardest thing ever known, and windows made out of gold that was operated into transparent gold color. The streets were shiny red smoothen rubies, with the BLUEST sky they have ever seen. The grass was very very green. But it seemed like there was something in the grass. Suddenly, a pocket - sized green baboon jumped out and started walking towards the castle. The girls followed thy baboon.
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Inside of the castle was more than gorgeous. Everything in there shined royally and a golden door appeared in front of them. The door opened and in there was a gigantic living room . A throne was in the middle of that room and a person was sitting in it. "Welcome. What are you here for?" Queen Victoria said. 'Wow she is beautiful. How graceful.' all the girls thought. "umm.. Your majesty, we're here to ask you if you know about the magic world." "Oh.. okay. and please. Don't call me 'your majesty', just call me Queen Victoria :) Yes, i do know about the magic world. In fact, I made these baboons with my magic. TEA!!!!" Immediately 6 baboons came and brought them tea. Then, Quee Victoria stood up and said "Here, I will lead you guys to the power center, you are going to love it."
3/26/2012 10:15:52 pm

Hurry up on the next chapter!

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Carol
4/1/2012 03:37:18 pm

Do you only write about your classmates?

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Lannie
4/1/2012 03:39:48 pm

you could be in my story if u want... tell me tomorrow !!!! :P

Alice
4/2/2012 11:14:02 am

I'm not lannies classmate, I'm her neighbor and friend

Carol Lu
4/4/2012 11:53:27 am

Yes I know you are her neighbor and friend... And ok lannie, I'm just asking, u don't really wanna be in the story

Carol Lu
4/4/2012 11:55:00 am

I mean I don't wanna b in the story

Carol
8/3/2012 12:37:34 pm

Actually I do!!!!! I wanna be in the story!!! just plz make me a good guy, though....

Carol
8/23/2012 08:26:53 pm

hey lan i have a website send an email 2 me n i'll tell u about it

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Carol
8/24/2012 07:32:05 pm

Oy, Lannie.... btw, my website address is sciscarollu.weebly.com

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8/27/2012 01:12:44 am

Hehe nice stories! Hope another chapter comes out soon!!! XD

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